17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2







https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDCUUlxVF5Y&feature=youtu.be




I learned a lot from the feedback on my last elevatoer pitch. I learned from my feedback that I must be in more care of how to trest the customer. The customer must have the best quality on the market and that means giving a good presentation. One of my classmates labeled the videp as vague, so I've corrected it in this video in order to give more excitment to the viewer and imorove my content. I learned that people's time is important and thats why content uploaded should be of quality because its the people time i'm taking in it.

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  1. Allison RussakisMarch 17, 2019 at 6:54 PM

    Juan,

    Although I did not watch your last elevator pitch, I think this one was an improvement based on your reflection. I think in this video you do a great job of giving an overview of your service and provide the perfect amount of detail. The content and presentation of it were entertaining and informative. Great job!

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  2. Maurice HendricksMarch 18, 2019 at 12:43 PM

    Hey Juan,

    Really nice job improving your pitch based on the feedback that you received from last time! It's good that we have friends and classmates that will give us an honest opinion so that we can improve and become more successful. I like how you took others opinions and actually changed them in your pitch, you took the critiques and changed what you needed to. Great job!

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  3. Donovan StinerMarch 18, 2019 at 10:24 PM

    Hi Juan,
    I think you did a great job in taking feedback from your last elevator pitch and using it to better your second video. In my opinion, it is great that all of us in this class are able to critique each other and help each other to get better. You seem very well spoken in the elevator pitch and you do a great job introducing your product. I feel that you did a good job with this assignment and I wish you luck in the future.

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